Synopsis
of our Chapter Seventeen Discussion
by Dawn Spinney
Week of May 28, 2007 Chapter Seventeen: In Which I Am Sold at Auction: This chapter starts out with Hitty still in the cabinet and awaiting
the arrival of the “old lady”. Rachel didn’t give the
lady a name. Hitty spent all these years in her home and apparently never
knew her name. Maybe Rachel was getting tired of the story and wanted
to get it done and didn’t bother with details. [See discussion about
the “old lady” with Chapter 8 synopsis.] Hitty is apparently to be sold at auction. She is happy to finally
be away from the china animals she had spent years sitting with. On the day of the auction Hitty does not care for the way she
is manhandled by the crowd who are anxious to look her over. One gentleman,
though, is very cautious and careful with her and declares that she “is
a very rare bit of early Americana.” He wins the bidding for Hitty,
thankfully, as I wonder what Hitty’s life would have been if the
“large lady in a tight pink dress and bright green hat” had
won her. The old man puts Hitty in his jacket pocket with her head out.
She can see everything as they walk down the road to Portland. She notices
that not much has changed in 100 years besides an added house or two,
strange ships in the harbor and cars flashing by. They boarded a train,
and as the train crossed into New Hampshire he said “You’re
beginning your travels now, Hitty. I don’t suppose you were ever
out of the State of Maine before.” Oh, if only she could talk!!
In this chapter, Hitty shows many of the emotions we have come to recognize in her. She was a bit put out when the old lady didn't return to the Preble house in the spring to keep Hitty company during the nice days. Of course she couldn't know the lady had died. She was "filled with vague misgivings" when unknown men tramped through the house hanging numbers on everything, including her. She didn't know what an auction was! She was surprised, once again, by the changes in women's and children's clothing styles. She was upset when the bidders handled her roughly. She was hopeful that the little girl Molly was interested in owning her. She was flattered by the attentions of the Old Gentleman. She was surprised by the types of common household objects that were popular and expensive. She had tremors in her pegs when she was bid on, but she tried to maintain her dignity as her pride surfaced at the high price. She was "rather overcome" by all these emotions and was relieved to be politely and kindly handled by the Old Gentleman. Her last thought, I feel, was a smug little smirk-- "If you only knew the places I've been and the things I've seen!" In Which We Invent New Endings For This Chapter: What if Rachel had her go with the lady in the tight pink dress and bright green hat? She could have had many strange adventures. Perhaps the lady was a gun moll! She could have been running around robbing places like Bonnie Parker of Bonnie and Clyde fame. She sure would have been recognizable with that gaudy outfit on. She could have been the head of a gang of robbers. The time frame was almost correct for Bonnie Parker, Clyde Barrow, and Eliot Ness. They would have been pretty young in 1920 but there were a lot of gangs running around in that time frame. (Hitty might have become really famous as the sidekick of a gun moll. Imagine her previous owners’ shock if they saw a picture of Hitty in the newspaper portrayed as a member of a gang of robbers.) Perhaps the lady would have loved and taken good care of Hitty.
Maybe she wanted a female companion to be with her all the time, someone
she could trust. Maybe she wanted Hitty to join her in a heist. Hitty
would easily fit into a pocket to go on a “bank run”. I can
only imagine what would be going through Hitty’s mind. Not exactly
a story for young children. My mind is wandering this morning and I guess
I’m losing it. Better leave the writing to others. But then . .
. if the lady got caught, perhaps the FBI man would grab Hitty for his
daughter!! And then she’s off to another, and, I’m sure, a
much safer adventure much to Hitty’s relief. haha!! Hitty the gun moll!! She would then have been dropped
in the bank and saved someone's life by taking the bullet meant for them,
right? OH DEAR--- a bullet in the HITTY BOD?????? I would say she saved
a life by being dropped --- startling the bad guys when they heard her
hit the floor. Everyone else hit the floor after that.. thus missing the
one bullet fired? The bad guys ran from the bank, almost empty handed.
Hitty was found by a little girl during the aftermath confusion. Girl
tucked Hitty into a pocket, only to take her out when she was safely home.
Later, someone remembered the doll hitting the floor. Girl and Hitty got
a huge spread in the paper's across the nation and............ what next?
:) Oh, definitely not the bullet for Hitty. What would have happened
is, the bullet would have deflected off her magical mountain ash wood
body, ricocheted up and hit the vault, ricocheted again and hit the robber
in the butt, thereby disabling him. The other robber would have been so
stunned that the people in the bank would jump him and it would be all
over. Our Hitty would be the heroine. The FBI man would claim her for
his daughter and Hitty would be off to a new life!!! That is a riot! Hitty's lucky mountain ash wood saves the day,
AND she gets a wonderful new and young owner! Maybe the “gun moll” loses Hitty to the FBI man,
and the FBI man’s daughter is little Molly who attended the auction
and wanted Hitty. Oh, heavens--I think it would have been both terrible and wonderful if the horrible lady had won Hitty! Perhaps she would have escaped and been found by the little girl! But then, she wouldn't have ended up in the antiques shop, would she? I loved this chapter, although I was rooting for the poor little
girl. She would have made such a great Mom for Hitty. I think it would be fun to come up with an alternate ending with
the little girl winning her in the auction...just imagine the new adventures
she could've had. OUR PRECIOUS HITTY? A Criminal? A GUN MOLL? 'Say it ain't so'
--- (but it would be interesting). I love your rendition of a different ending for Hitty. Although
Rachel wrote this book in more mature language, the book itself was written
for children so I doubt she would have made Hitty go with the lady if
she were a gun moll. I thought the lady was more like Zylooka Dunbar who
ran the boarding house on the TV show "The Waltons". Hitty could
have had some great adventures with the residents of the boarding house.
She even might have been packed into one of the resident’s suitcases
when the person decided to move on, and then another adventure would begin. Or maybe Mata Hari!!! Or Amelia Earhart!!! Sandra Bernhardt!!! I bet we could think of plenty of 1920's celebrities in disguise. From Hitty Timeline: Hitty’s Travels Thus Far: Chapter 1: In Maine with the Preble family;
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